The Official Writing Challenge
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04/19/05
Interesting take on this topic. I wonder if it might have been more effective if the whole story were as light-hearted as the last half. Starting the story with dramatic, heavy, true events and then switching to the fictional, entertaining part so abruptly threw me for a loop, but maybe that's just me. I did enjoy it - thanks for sharing your work.
04/25/05
Hi Delores. Once again, I just want to take a moment to encourage you and let you know that The Celebration made it into the semi-finals for the Anniversary Challenge. It was a very close competition and everyone who made it into the semi-finals deserves to be congratulated. So keep writing and entering the challenge. With two weeks in a row in the semi-finals, you are going well. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
05/02/05
It started with the tree and on the tree He said, "It is finished." Wow. I never thought about that parallel before. This is a creative story Delores! I'll see you there. Crista