The Official Writing Challenge
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This story grabbed my attention in the first few lines and kept it straight through. By the time I finished, I had a tear in my eye. Nice work!
04/19/05
I liked how your story came full circle in the end. It made me a little sad to think that the relationship between Maggie and Anna didn't have the chance to grow. (FYI: extra space between your paragraphs is helpful to the reader.) Nice entry.
04/21/05
Lovely
04/21/05
Lovely peice. Touching.
Compassionate.