The Official Writing Challenge
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A poweful testimony to this farther. I liked how he "reeled in" until the end. Nice job.
This is wonderful! It was so easy to read, and you didn't bore me anywhere along the way. Good title too, and by the way, you "reeled me" into your story. Wonderful, just wonderful!
02/09/07
Wonderful story! I loved your analogy, the descriptions, the sense of your dad's character conveyed here. Definately a "keeper" of a story. :)
02/09/07
Indeed a keeper of a story! Thanks for sharing it. What a testimony to your Father!
Loved this story. Good writing, but the thoughts were a little scattered. It needs to be fused together a little more smoothly.