The Official Writing Challenge
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02/13/07
Pretty good topical sermonette, I liked the direct approach, although mixing the second person in the personal story was troublesome.
02/14/07
Your boys are blessed to have you! Good article with many truths. Blessings, Jo
02/14/07
Pretty good. I like the title. ^_^
02/14/07
I like the term "sermonette" used in the earlier comment. When I read this aloud, it flowed better than it did when I first read it. (Maybe that's my fault. Maybe my mind wasn't focused the first time.) I like the message a lot.
02/14/07
Very nice. Good concept and message. Enjoyed it. God bless.