The Official Writing Challenge
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A sweet story. I would separate the dialogue for easier reading.
02/02/07
Touching story and I agree about the spacing. A great read nonetheless!
02/03/07
Very tender.

Since this is territory that has been covered before, consider adding some new twist to make it more fresh and original.

The ending is very nice--a good reminder of the lives we touch.
02/03/07
A very nice and touching story.