The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved your first paragraph and your closing. I just wanted you to know I struggled with the middle. You jumped a little and some parts were not clear. I think you have alot of talent. So keep writing!
02/02/07
A fun trip down memory lane as those are all favorites of mine too! I loved the first line as my preschooler just this week had the "RIF day-Reading is Fundamental!"
02/03/07
Your second paragraph is great--isn't that a wonderful experience?
02/03/07
Yes, books are an adventure and your enthusiasm for them is contagious. Very nice!
02/04/07
Very nice - I agree the middle was a bit scattered, but the beginning and end were quite good and readable. Great job!