The Official Writing Challenge
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This was fun reading. I really liked all the suspense in the first half, the writer sitting meeting this woman, perhaps the first time, the wind blowing, etc, made me wonder if this was her fictional character she was writing about -meeting the character for the first time. It really kept my interest. Good job.
04/18/05
Beautiful! Reminds me of the book of Hosea.
04/19/05
Although your first paragraph was confusing, it also intrigued me and kept me reading. I also liked how you set the scene in the diner - I felt as if I was there. My only struggle was that I thought you (the writer) were Kevin's wife! I kept looking back to see if I'd missed something, but then you spelled it out in the end. This was fun to read, thanks for sharing your work.
04/20/05
I thought you were Kevin's buddy, partner, pal, ya see. It is a scene right out of a film noir. Like Sam Spade I'm happy to play along and get the details later.Great story. Had me right in there seeing all the characters including the wind and rain blowing outside. Just needed a little clarification in the beginning. Still an excellent story and writing. dave