The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/07
Yea for the Audrey Mays in the world! This was very sweet.
01/30/07
I wonder how many children who want so badly to be a good artist are discouraged by a teacher like Mrs. Armstrong. I agree, nine years old is too young of an age for kids to be put on a career path.

I wasn't sure if Audrey was right in confronting the teacher in front of the entire class. That was the only thing that made me a little uncomfortable with this story. But that's just my opinion.

Your descriptions were very good. You set the scene so that I felt as if I were in that classroom with Audrey.