The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/07
This was such a sweet story. I think it needs a little fine tuning with spelling and spacing. An enjoyable piece nonetheless!
01/31/07
Wow. I was touched by the scene in the hospital room and loved the contrast/comparison between the two "works of art". Loved your title and loved the story. Well done.