The Official Writing Challenge
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Very interesting! Your description of the lady and the scene was very well-written. I did wonder how it would end. Thanks for sharing!
very good
Oooh, this is very good! Creative, unique, well-written.
Beautiful story, wonderfully told. I was right there with them.
Oh, is this wonderful! I love the whole premise, and your characterization. I was right there with her!
I liked the idea that this famous painting could have been done of someone who ended up in a place like this. I loved the interaction between the narrator and the lady. A very nice story. Thanks for sharing it
This is touching. Your descriptions were so well done, it seemed as though I was right there with the narrator.

Great twist to the story, too. That last line is memorable. Masterful job!
What a twist! I liked that, it was a great surprise ending, you held my attention all the way through, as I wanted to see what would happen to the dear lady. You did a great job with the suspense. Thanks for sharing!
Oooh! I really like this. The final sentence is haunting, just like the face! Nice job.