The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked the "voice" in this story. It gave just the right nonchalance of the frat boy trying to be tough and unaffected by it all. It also made the brokeness of the confession that much more powerful. A pronoun issue and some punctuation problems here, but those are easily corrected. The writing skill and voice are what make this a winner!
A very interesting character study. You gave him a very authentic "voice" but I admit I was thrown a bit by the roughness of his speech. However this seems like an authentic account and it certainly seems to be honest. You have promise as a writer. Keep writing!
I enjoyed reading this story. Not only the other characters, but also the narrator came alive for me with his colorful tough-guy way of talking!

Great message and one I can identify with, often having wished I'd done things differently.

The title also grabbed me. I'm always curious about personal name titles--what the characters who have the names are like--and also enjoyed this original twist on the prompt "Art." (I wondered if anyone would do that!)