The Official Writing Challenge
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What a sweet and endearing poem. A couple of typo's but otherwise a nice, easy read with neat message.
I have tears in my eyes. A very sweet read.
Very sweet story in rhyme!

Work a bit on meter and small punctuation errors--but you've definitely got a poet's heart. This is charming.
Aww, this is so sweet. The meter needs a little tweaking, but it's nothing major. This conveyed a very nice message. Good work.
This was excellent. Writing a story within a poem can be so difficult, but this was so well done and touching. It made me cry. I loved it!
This is beautiful! Congrats on an excellent piece!
Hi Angie.

I have some good news for you. You didn't actually receive a highly commended award for this entry--you were actually awarded

3rd Place

in Level 2.

There was a slight mistake made by me when I prepared the list of winners for FaithWriters. You were on the list, but the url for your entry was wrong, and it threw the system out. Whoops.

Silly mistake, but fairly easy to fix. So FaithWriters will be changing the list as soon as possible, and you'll soon have a 3rd place award on your entry.

Sorry about the mix up.

Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)