The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/07
I like your easy-going, casual voice here, especially in the last 4 paragraphs.

Several errors in word usage and punctuation are slightly distracting here--I'm sure one more edit would have caught them.

I sure agree with you about the places you named--they're magnificent!
01/25/07
I love that last line about student of the arts. I love those places as well!