The Official Writing Challenge
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01/18/07
You did a wonderful job of characterization. I loved knowing Trina both "then" and "now" - and I certainly felt like I knew Nana through her lovely diary entries. A great ending too.
I can't tell you how much I enjoyed your article. I felt like I was there from the time you started reading the diary and on to the remebrance of the entries. I, too, am a Nana and so that gave me still another dimension. You did a great job of writing and pulling this together in a meaningful entry. Thanks for your submission.
What a precious story of a grandmother's influence. The diary writings were believable and helped in your character development. Nice piece.