The Official Writing Challenge
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01/20/07
Just LOVE this metaphor! You did an excellent job of carrying this throughout the piece. This was absolutely delightful.
01/22/07
I especially liked the ending.
The "watering can" refreshingly showered me throughout your writing!
Great writing. I loved your reference to Proverbs and how your piece validates it in a special way to the reader!
01/25/07
Congrats on your win! This piece truly deserves it. I like your comparisons and descriptions. Very well done! :)