The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/07
a few gramatical errors but other than that a very sweet story
01/11/07
Very sweet. This was as sweet and comforting as one of those coffeecakes. Well done!
01/13/07
Cute. Love the message and the "Grandma Moments". Makes me want some coffee cake. You could even put coffe in it for me! ;)
01/15/07
This was precious and a delight to read. I could picture the little tike helping. Great lesson at the end that could also be applied to mothers and fathers. The line about the coffee in the cake was cute and so much like what a child of that age would say. Great job!