The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/07
A very nice lesson and one we all need to remember. Nice work.
01/12/07
Great story! Wonderful dialogue, description, and message--I could see everything happening and feel with the narrator.

A few spelling errors.

My favorite descriptive passage: "soaked into the commercials."

01/13/07
Although this didn't feel entirely realistic (as in I couldn't really see it happening like that), your message was very true. We have SO much and still complain. Our contentment will only be found in Christ. Amen!
How true, we don't always consider what we have to be grateful for. What a blessing to finally understand.