The Official Writing Challenge
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I like how you differentiated between cooking and baking. That was a difference I hadn't thought about before.

The article seemed rushed. Slow down and take your time telling the story. I would be great if you described more of the family baking part.

I enjoyed your family memory.
A lovely memory. I agree that I would have liked to hear more. You have a way of words and I would enjoy reading more of them!
I felt the excitement you experienced when your mother was baking, as distinct from cooking, and the preparations made. One felt the love in the home even though the entry was a short one.