The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/07
A very interesting and thought-provoking take on the topic. Now, where do I get that date with George Clooney? (seriously, though... I liked it!)
01/13/07
Great opening paragraph and I liked how you made so many good comparisons throughout. You wrapped it up with a good last paragraph as well. You might want to change up some of the words 'you' and make it more personal there ...just a thought. This is a very good devotional with cute humor:)
Good point. Very good, though leave some white space between paragraphs for an easier read.
01/18/07
Very good take on the subject. Quick fixes may surely get one fixed, the slow cooking is much more preserving as you point out. Very well written.