The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/07
A very interesting and thought-provoking take on the topic. Now, where do I get that date with George Clooney? (seriously, though... I liked it!)
01/13/07
Great opening paragraph and I liked how you made so many good comparisons throughout. You wrapped it up with a good last paragraph as well. You might want to change up some of the words 'you' and make it more personal there ...just a thought. This is a very good devotional with cute humor:)
Good point. Very good, though leave some white space between paragraphs for an easier read.
Very good take on the subject. Quick fixes may surely get one fixed, the slow cooking is much more preserving as you point out. Very well written.