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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Friendship (04/04/05)

TITLE: Sufficient Grace
By Debbie OConnor
04/08/05


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The alarm blared, assaulting Elizabeth Scott’s senses. She bolted upright in shock. Now she paid the toll for consoling her sick daughter overnight. “No,” she moaned, “it can’t be morning!”

Liz staggered across the floor to stop the noise. Every nerve in her body screamed with fatigue. Standing before her alarm clock, she weighed her need for sleep with her need to hear from God. I can squeeze some reading in when Jenna naps… she thought…if she naps. She made her choice with a reluctant sigh.

Her reflection mocked her from the bathroom mirror. Liz pulled her hair into a ponytail and washed her face vigorously. “Help me, Lord,” she grumbled.

Before long, Liz was in her favorite chair drinking coffee and reading her Bible. “Man does not live on bread alone,” she read. “But on every word that proceeds from the mouth of God.”

She chuckled, “Woman does not live on sleep alone either, Lord.”

My grace is sufficient for you, for my power is made perfect in weakness. The words seared her mind.

Liz found the passage and read it. Spiritually parched, she drank the scripture’s meaning greedily. “I believe you, Father. You are all I need,” she prayed.

A song of praise bubbled through her. Before she knew it, Liz was dancing around the living room in her pajamas. The power of God surged through her. Tears of joy streamed down her face. She felt like David when he said, “With your help I can advance against a troop; with my God I can scale a wall.”

“Mommy?” A worried little voice penetrated Liz’s consciousness. “Mommy, why are you crying?”

“Jenna!” Liz said, startled. “Good morning, Baby.” She laughed and swung her daughter into her arms, kissing her until she squealed.

“Why were you crying, Mommy?” Jenna asked when she stopped giggling.

“Oh,” she said in surprise. “I’m crying because I’m happy.”

“Why are you happy?”

“I’m happy because Jesus loves me. He makes me strong when I’m weak.”

“How does He do that?”

“His Holy Spirit lives in me,” she said, and then she caught herself. Lord, help me put this in words she’ll understand, she prayed silently.

“Umm, it’s hard to explain, but even though we can’t see Jesus, He is with us all the time. When I’m tired, he makes me strong. When I’m sad, he makes me feel better. When I’m happy, He is happy with me.”

“How do you know that if you can’t see Him?”

“I can feel Him. I can hear Him. I can read about His love for me in the Bible,” she said.

After a pause, Liz continued, “You know, Jenna, if Jesus wasn’t with me, I would be very tired and grouchy this morning. Instead, I’ve been singing and dancing. Isn’t Jesus wonderful?”

“He sure is.” Then, with a preschool-sized attention shift and little pause, she continued, “Mommy, I’m hungry.”

I wonder if she heard a thing I said, Liz thought.

“Okay, sweetie. Let’s get you some breakfast,” she replied.

As Jenna devoured her cereal, Liz realized she had not heard her cough that morning.

“Baby, how do you feel today?”

“Good.”

“Thank you, Jesus!”

“Did Jesus make me well?” Jenna asked around the cereal in her mouth. Liz ignored her full mouth to make the most of a teachable moment.

“He sure did, Jenna.”

“Wow!” Jenna exclaimed with a grin. Milk dribbled freely down her chin onto her pajamas. “Thanks, Jesus.”

Liz turned to fill her dishwasher. The morning’s song still filled her heart. The peace of God pervaded her home.

The rest of the day passed like a dream. Liz marveled to discover she had enough energy to accomplish everything she had planned and more. She thanked God all day long.

When Jenna napped, Liz forced herself to rest.

Jason Scott came home to find his wife and daughter reading a book on the sofa. His home was clean and dinner was ready. He flashed his wife a happy smile.

“I expected you to be worn out after last night.”

“I was, but I had some help from a friend.”

“A friend?”

“Jesus, Daddy! He made Mommy strong, and He made me well. And He made us happy all day long.”

Maybe she was listening after all, Liz thought.


Mt 4:4, 2 Cor 12:9, Ps 18:29 (NIV)


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Crista Darr04/11/05
Hooray for this wonderful, heart-warming piece. I loved it!
Helga Doermer04/11/05
I enjoy your story-telling style. It brings the characters alive.
Leticia Caroccio04/12/05
A wonderful title for a wonderful article. His grace really is sufficient for us, no matter what the circumstance. Your format made the article easy to read and flowed nicely. I liked the dialogue between mother and child. You managed to capture the child's innocence and the tired but willing attitude of a mom who was up all night. I think you did a fine job. Nicely, nicely done.
darlene hight04/15/05
Nicely done! I enjoyed the conversation back and forth between the daughter and mom. The description of God gripping her with his word was also well done. The beginning felt a little sluggish with details instead of letting the action move the reader into the story and the end I would let a little more confusion about the identity of the friend creep in with the daughtereventually spilling the beans. The flow,the message and the dialog all are very well done. Great job!
Nancy Hardy04/15/05
This is a well constructed story. I very much enjoyed the tangible examples you offered, implementing God's grace in such a realistic and identifiable situation. What a Friend We Have in Jesus set to the tempo of a busy and dedicated mother. I thoroughly enjoyed this literary weave - Well Done!!
Suzanne R04/16/05
Gorgeous. And bravo to you too for being obedient in the priority you place on your Christian walk.
Lois Jennison Tribble04/19/05
Great job, Debbie -- congratulations on your award. I love the ending, perfectly resolving "I wonder if she heard a thing I said". Very realistic depiction of a mother's life, and her need for Jesus. What would we do without our best friend?
Cheri Hardaway 04/23/05
You know I loved it! Keep up the good work!

In His love, Cheri

Sally Hanan04/23/05
This was very sweet Debbie. Oh for days like that every day! Now if you'll excuse me, I need to shut my office door and put on some praise and worship....


   
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