The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/07
I really enjoyed this story! Interesting title, great descriptions and dialogue. I loved the ending, too!
01/11/07
Love the story. That sounds just like something I would do.

I wish you would have made me feel more of a sense of urgency in the crisis. Also, your sentences seemed long and jumbled.

This was really a great story.
This is delightful. You're a very good story teller. Keep up the good work.
01/11/07
This was so funny! I'll bet it did taste good, and I'll bet some of us may even try it. A wonderfully enjoyable story!
01/12/07
Did this really happen? It sounds as if it did. I never would have thought of using baby food carrots.
Great story! Its too creative to be fiction. This must have really happened.
01/12/07
What fun, and you really got me with that kicker.
01/13/07
very entertaining. im going to try that.
Precious! I have no idea if this is true, but it sounds very believable. Thanks for a fun read.