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I really enjoyed this story! Interesting title, great descriptions and dialogue. I loved the ending, too!
Love the story. That sounds just like something I would do.

I wish you would have made me feel more of a sense of urgency in the crisis. Also, your sentences seemed long and jumbled.

This was really a great story.
This is delightful. You're a very good story teller. Keep up the good work.
This was so funny! I'll bet it did taste good, and I'll bet some of us may even try it. A wonderfully enjoyable story!
Did this really happen? It sounds as if it did. I never would have thought of using baby food carrots.
Great story! Its too creative to be fiction. This must have really happened.
What fun, and you really got me with that kicker.
very entertaining. im going to try that.
Precious! I have no idea if this is true, but it sounds very believable. Thanks for a fun read.