The Official Writing Challenge
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Great message. I love the way you wove it in to this delightful read.
I loved this! Right on the money with the analogy. Good for you!
01/11/07
I really enjoyed this one! Thanks for a good analogy. Keep on writing!
Very creative. Loved the analogy of the cookie. Very good. Keep up the good work.
01/11/07
Very, very good. I loved the conversation (it seemed very real) and the lesson that was mixed into the story. Very nice!
01/12/07
Unless God stirs everything together and heats it, He won’t end up with cookies...

What a great line!
01/13/07
great lesson! great story! great analogy!
01/18/07
A great one - and congrats on placing!!
01/18/07
Any story with chocolate in it has my vote!!! Seriously, really enjoyed this and loved the connection about ingredients.