The Official Writing Challenge
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12/14/06
What grabbed me first in this story was the second paragraph, describing the main character so I could easily picture him. Would like to see the piece open with this colorful imagery.

I liked the specific descriptions of ways the main character helped others during the snowstorm. Would like to see some dialogue thrown in--that would make him come even more alive. He does sound like a true hero!
12/17/06
A lovely tribute to your dad and I saw him clearly also. You expressed yourself very well.
12/18/06
This is a most refreshing look at your dad. How proud you must be of him. I hope he can read this heart-warming article about himself and see how highly his daughter holds him in her heart. The article is well written and expresses clearly your appreciation of this formerly unsung hero.