The Official Writing Challenge
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12/14/06
I really enjoyed the imagery of this story--I could see everything. It reminded me of my younger daughter, who's into medieval-type fantasy and who says she wants a hobbit wedding!

Just a couple of typos--"I walked slowed" ("slowly"?) and "marred an amazing man" (assume that "married" is the desired word!).

The unusual title grabbed me. Good job!
12/15/06
I enjoyed this entry. I know how thrilled you must feel at bringing two people together and one of them to God.
12/16/06
This reminded me of a friend who loves Ren Faires and such gatherings. I could definitely see this clearly as you described it. Nice story!
12/18/06
Very vivid descriptions, I could hear the music and see the outfits. great job with this!
Great story, well written, you already know of the couple of typos, so just keep writing, well done!