The Official Writing Challenge
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Your title intriqued me and I was not disappointed by your entry. I liked the dream and the imagery that Paul shared with his congregation. Well written; an enjoyable read.
Loved the dream, and your description throughout this piece. I got your message, by the way. :) This felt entirely natural and was quite engaging. Great read!
Good job, a very likeable character and a pleasant read.
Very believable. I loved how you wove the dream and its message into the sermon. Nice work. Blessings, Cheri
This seemed real and I beleived it. Good writing!
Food for thought. Very well done. Thanks for sharing this.
Great application for parishoners to learn from. Good dialogue and story. Nicely done.
Absolutely loved this! What a great piece. The character was wonderful, but I almost missed the part that the beginning was a dream, maybe use an extra space or something? The ending was great too, good job!
The description, especially in the first two paragraphs, is superb. Your pastor seems like a very likeable guy. Creative take on literally feeding the sheep, or congregation. Nicely done.
this is kinda ironic in a way cause I was considering writing from this passage as well. Loved the dream sequence..very real and very moving.
I really enjoyed your story. It had very realistic and believable dialog. I could see your pastor's personality and your story had a good message besides. :)
A little confused at the beginning - but Wow, then came the main line..the theme! Feed my sheep! Very creative and fit the topic to a "T". Really enjoyable read, and the footnote explained it all. Nice job.
Congratulations Cat!!! I knew you had it in you. Great story. You'll be a fine addition to Advanced. God bless!
Yahooooo! I knew it!
Congrats, my friend!
Congrats on a well-deserved win!