The Official Writing Challenge
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12/08/06
I love it! Can almost hear it sung, to a banjo accompaniment.
I enjoyed this reminder that the simple faith is often times the faith most in tuned with God.
12/12/06
An awesome revelation of how weak our humanity can be to the wiles of the evil one. And an equally awesome revelation of God's willingness to forgive and restore when we call upon Him. Well done. Blessings, Cheri
12/12/06
Great job! Love this poem and the message it contains. This is still my favorite line:
"I pled the needs, Betty cried the tears."
12/12/06
A very neat poem! Loved the part with 'possum cusine' LOL. This was really great, good job.
12/13/06
Such a strong message shared so beautifully and meaningfully. Wonderful!
12/13/06
Wow! Rhyme and meter is off - but the message came through loud and clear. Neat job, and says alot. Loved the idea of preaching to the fish. Nice job.