The Official Writing Challenge
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12/08/06
How blessed you are to have avoided heartbreak!

Work on punctuation a bit--a minor and fixable edit. I think this would make a very touching story, written in fiction-like format with dialog, etc. Might reach a few more people that way, perhaps?

Thanks for sharing this!
12/13/06
A bit of confusion as to what the man meant by "chooses opposite sex"; But thanks for sharing your story.