The Official Writing Challenge
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12/08/06
I like the local color here--it's a very visual piece. Nice job.

I was a bit confused as to the setting--maybe a bit more description along with your dialog? And I wish you had introduced Mildred earlier; she just kind of pops in to make her one comment.

This is a fun story to read!
I enjoyed reading this story.
The main characters came to life. I think it was difficult to get a more complete story about the angel told in such a short piece. Word count,I'm guessing. Good writing.
12/13/06
What a neat Wild West story! Entertaining, and had a great point; I thoroughly enjoyed the read. Kudos!