The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/06
Great object lesson, engagingly written.

If you haven't read "A Shapherd Looks at the 23rd Psalm," I highly recommend it.
How like our Lord to use everyday objects in order to teach spiritual lessons. Good job!
I liked your simple manner of telling an object lesson. Your writing was very natural and easy to read. My only suggestion is to eliminate
"need to" in the 3rd paragraph after the first time used.