The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/06
Clever title, and what fun it was to realize who was "speaking" toward the end!

Rhymed poetry like this usually flows better when the meter is more consistent. Feel free to PM or e-mail me for more details on that, if you wish.

This is a charming poem.
Good job! There are so many of God's servants in the Bible that give us hope knowing that we, too, are not perfect. Cute poem.
12/12/06
Pretty good, loved the title and the first 'verse'. Great job and great writing!