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12/07/06
I enjoyed the creative title, though at first I thought it was a typo. The ending made it clear. Nice entry
12/07/06
Loved the title and how you tied it in at the end.
12/07/06
I really like the play on words: perfect pasta, perfect pastor. Cute!

The first paragraph would be more powerful without the 2nd person references.

Blessings on your husband as he continues to seek his "pasta-rate!"
I liked this a lot. Creative title was good. The recipe for the Pastor was clever. Good writing!
12/10/06
Definitely clever! I enjoyed the lightheartedness of especially the end of this. Keep writing!
12/11/06
Clever, creative, and tight - a really nice piece, I loved the light humor. Thanks.
12/12/06
Great play on words and loved your thoughtfulness about a pastor's job. Very nice indeed.