The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/06
I suspect that your formatting may have gotten lost here--you have some lovely encouraging words about pastors. Work on learning poetry conventions and your work will just get better and better.
12/12/06
Pretty good. Could use some extra spaces in between to make it easier to read :) The gist of the idea carried through though. Good job and nice title.