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Very descriptive. Great depth to the story. Good job!
Wonderful story! Well written.
12/07/06
Superb writing! I was especially taken with the fact that she hadn't previously cared for this pastor because of some superficially unlikeable qualities, but in her illness she learned what was godly and fine about him.
I am struck with the fact that she can hear even though everything else is shutting down. The people at Hospice Care told us that the last thing to go is the hearing and that although nothing appears to be working....they can still hear. That is a message that comes through very clearly in your article. Thanks for writing an insightful piece.
12/09/06
This is a wonderful article - well written and moving. Love Pastor Bob!
12/11/06
I loved this article. Isn't it amazing how perspectives change when faced with eternity?! Pastor Bob is a hero.
12/12/06
Wow. What an insight. Great job.