The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 664 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
12/02/06
Very nice. I could imagine this scene easily. Well done!
Thank you, Tab, for writing this. I so appreciated the very evident humility of the Preacher. He was broken by the Father's heart and so God used his example to lead others.
There is such a great challenge in this spiritual truth for all of us and it simply starts with our surrender. You clearly wrote this.
Blessings on your pen.
12/06/06
Very nice job, great message. I especially like the last line. Perfect ending.
12/06/06
I can feel the tenderness of this pastor's heart. I caught a few punctuation problems, but this is a solid piece of writing! Great job.
12/06/06
Oh, this is beautiful. I just love the tender heart of this pastor. Thanks for sharing!