The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/06
I loved this story! A delightfully original twist in seeing volunteer work--followed by the Gospel message--as perceived through the eyes of a total Scrooge-like cynic! I especially liked when the narrator's scorn subtly turned to bafflement as he started considering Jesus as the ultimate "Volunteer." A creative concept--one begins at this point to really have hope for him!
12/02/06
I also enjoyed the change in the narrator's point of view. A good story. Nice job.
This is excellent. Such an amazing thing it is that Christ voluntarily gave up His life for us. I appreciate the reminder that Jesus is the ultimate volunteer. Thanks so much for sharing!