The Official Writing Challenge
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12/01/06
Very very good writing! Great message.

A couple minor things:

When you quote scripture, put the end quote mark at the end of the quote itself, then the reference after.

This reference "The (Luke 8: 14) majority" was awkward - could have gone after the sentence I think.

In "the presence of “outsiders” are viewed" the are should be is. Your noun is "presence" and is singular.

You definitely can write! I was so drawn into this article. Thank you for sharing this!
12/02/06
Every word of this rings with truth and conviction. So well put! Good writing, too.