The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/06
I really enjoyed this story and the message conveyed--though I found the middle section a little confusing. It came clear to me in the end, though, how Marty was applying for a pastor's job as well as considering scrubbing toilets--how this all tied together. Great concept!
11/30/06
Great story, great message!!
A little rough in parts to my "ears". I like the comparison of his thoughts to "socks in a dryer" but I think you may have an extra word or a missing word in that sentence. Your message came through wonderfully!!
I, too, like the story and I, too, found it to be a little confusing in the middle. It came out good in the end. It might work better if the middle were re-worked a little.
Good job.
12/01/06
I enjoyed this and the very real emotions of this man of God. Good work!
Nice story and interesting title. Good job.
12/06/06
A GREAT message, and your beginning and end were great. I also had trouble following in the middle, but you definitely pulled it together, and it all made sense by the time I was through! Nice job.