The Official Writing Challenge
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I found this to be a tender, heart wrenching story. It was well told, through obvious tears. Yet, in the midst of the pain you told of a yeildedness that lifts up hearts to our heavenly Father. I was drawn in to your pain and left wanting to know more...
So many stories this week that cry out to my heart, and this is one of them. Losing my daughter was one of the worst days of my life, yet when I read the accounts of others who also went through this journey, I am oddly comforted. It is only through turning to God for His heavenly comfort, and in turning to each other for support that we can find true peace at last. Thank you for sharing this... the Lord be with you.
You wrote of an experience every parent dreads and prays will not happen. However, it does happen and in your writing you gave the answer in a heartfelt message. Well written.
About your story---it speaks for itself.About your writing ability---GREAT JOB.You did what every writer desires to do.You drew the reader in and gave them a desire to know more.Keep writing!!!
awesome! What a tender, true story (even if it is not based on a true story)!