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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Parent (11/16/06)

TITLE: Abba
By Benjamin Graber
11/20/06


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My pride grows quicker than my heart,
I’m quick to toddle to the stairs
And look down like Napoleon,
At lands to conquer if I dare;

But soon I take a tumble
And pride, once injured, quickly swells,
Becoming more determined
To make myself my private hell;

I’ve thrown off all authority
And hope instead to walk in fame,
But tripping in my baby steps
I’m quick to cast off any blame—


But when I see I’m just a child
Who needs not walk this world alone,
And I’ve a Father waiting by
Who wants so much to bring me home,

Then I can take His hand in mine
And mount the stairs in victory,
Together we will walk in love,
No power of hate can conquer me;

And when I choose to take my pride
And place it in my Daddy’s hand,
Not even hell in all its strength
Against my Dad and I can stand…


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Donna Emery11/24/06
Very, very true. A nice comparison between spiritual and physical childhood. Good job.
fed up11/25/06
Very good. A lot said in such a short poem. I enjoyed it.
David (The Goliath Assassin)05/09/07
I have alot to learn in this department. Forgive me while I try to sneek off unseen...


   
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