The Official Writing Challenge
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A very nice tribute to your mother. You are going to make her cry!..Happy tears, of course.
A beautiful example of a life well lived. You have a few grammatical difficulties to be ironed out. That doesn't change the fact that this was a touching piece on a humble woman who showed Jesus to everyone she met. Even if this piece doesn't win, you already won by getting the mom you received. What a wonderful head start in life! If you ever need some help with proofreading, I'd be happy to help. Thanks for sharing your incredible mother with us!
This is very lovely, and it definitely touched my heart. You made me see your mom clearly. Great job.
A wonderful telling of a mother anyone would be proud to claim. I can relate to your way of telling a story. A couple grammatical stumbles but I doubt that would detter a good editor. Your premise was wonderful. I actually felt a bit disappointed the story ended so adruptly.