The Official Writing Challenge
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A very nice tribute to your mother. You are going to make her cry!..Happy tears, of course.
11/23/06
A beautiful example of a life well lived. You have a few grammatical difficulties to be ironed out. That doesn't change the fact that this was a touching piece on a humble woman who showed Jesus to everyone she met. Even if this piece doesn't win, you already won by getting the mom you received. What a wonderful head start in life! If you ever need some help with proofreading, I'd be happy to help. Thanks for sharing your incredible mother with us!
11/24/06
This is very lovely, and it definitely touched my heart. You made me see your mom clearly. Great job.
11/25/06
A wonderful telling of a mother anyone would be proud to claim. I can relate to your way of telling a story. A couple grammatical stumbles but I doubt that would detter a good editor. Your premise was wonderful. I actually felt a bit disappointed the story ended so adruptly.