The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed this. My favorite in this level. It got my attention and kept it. Great job!
11/17/06
VERY clever! I had NO idea where this was going, and you took me there expertly - I definitely enjoyed the trip. Great detail.
This made me excited about going to Heaven! Everthing's safe! I liked the originality and the descriptions. (It would nice to have some cute lifeguards in Heaven, though!)
11/18/06
Wonderful, wonderful! Full of human emotion and the matter-of-fact innocence of youth. Loved this!
11/19/06
Creatively done! I especially liked how Heaven was seen through a child’s eyes, and not the adult protagonist. I don’t think you title does this piece justice, although it’s proper. Maybe it’s just me!
One of my fav's as well this week. I loved the fact he was dreaming about heaven. This is a creative take on the topic and it was a joy to read.
11/20/06
Wow! I've been wandering through the Intermediates and can't believe the talent I see. Your story was creative, on topic, and just plain delightful. I pity the judges this week! In short, your story ROCKS!