The Official Writing Challenge
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11/17/06
I kept waiting with each person introduced to figure out who Lowell was - definitely kept my interest! A well-told story, with a wonderful message of God's work in our world.
11/18/06
Well told account. Put direct thoughts in italics, it will seperate them from speech.
11/18/06
"A roughness from living life too hard" was one of my favorite lines from this well-written story. Well done.
I enjoyed this article. It held my attention to the end. I chuckled when I read the word "swimmingly". It was like sneaking in a word from the tasks at hand. Keep writing.
11/20/06
Boy, was this story on topic OR WHAT? Most of us don't have a lifeguard story....if this one indeed happened. Nice job of conveying so much in such little space.