The Official Writing Challenge
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I kept waiting with each person introduced to figure out who Lowell was - definitely kept my interest! A well-told story, with a wonderful message of God's work in our world.
Well told account. Put direct thoughts in italics, it will seperate them from speech.
"A roughness from living life too hard" was one of my favorite lines from this well-written story. Well done.
I enjoyed this article. It held my attention to the end. I chuckled when I read the word "swimmingly". It was like sneaking in a word from the tasks at hand. Keep writing.
Boy, was this story on topic OR WHAT? Most of us don't have a lifeguard story....if this one indeed happened. Nice job of conveying so much in such little space.