The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/06
This doctor sounds like a wonderful person! He would come more alive for me as a character if I could hear him talk, use dialog with the family. Also if there were detailed descriptions of his facial expressions, gestures, mannerisms, voice tone, etc...anything that would make me see and hear him (along with the other characters) and put me more right there in the story.