The Official Writing Challenge
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11/11/06
Year 7? What a "lady or the tiger" ending. How sad that America's wealth and style of living tempts many foreign born doctors from returning to the communities that need them so greatly. A very thought-provoking piece.
11/16/06
This was pretty interesting. I felt as if it didn't go as deep into the character of Raj as deeply as it should have. The story overall was pretty good, I wish the ending had been a little more tied together though, but good job and congrats on placing! :)
I was thrilled to see this place as it was one of my favourites in this level when judging. Great work! Jules