The Official Writing Challenge
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11/10/06
I love this! I'm sorry for your difficult experience, and glad that you found a compassionate professional. My son-in-law is studying to be a nurse, and I found it refreshing that you wrote about a male nurse. In my experience, they are awesome!

I really liked the fable; you did a great job there.
11/12/06
A very neat story - I love that it came from gratitude. Very cool!
11/15/06
This story really intrigued me. I loved the format of the story within a story and how the allegory applied to the actual situation. Very creative, as well as having a beautiful message!