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11/10/06
Well written and full of compassion.

Try to avoid 2nd-person references (as in your second paragraph).

I share your sentiments wholeheartedly.
11/10/06
Appreciated the point my made about the expression on the face of a departed saint. Those in oncology must see glimpes into the mystery of dying. Mysteries we "shield" the family from. They let me in to see my husband and he had such a beautiful expression of peace on his face, I envyed him. Thank for your your insight.
11/12/06
What wonderful, compelling tales you have woven together here! This warmed my heart through an through, and was a very enjoyable read!