The Official Writing Challenge
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11/04/06
like this! very clever
11/06/06
Great job of communicating your weariness and despair.

Be careful of switching from past to present tense and back.

Love the character of the Teacher--a deft touch of allegory.
11/07/06
This was so vivid and real - and I LOVE LOVE LOVE the end. Excellent work!
11/07/06
Wow! I loved this and I needed to read it... very applicable to teachers and to all other overburdened workers. Thanks for sharing this.