The Official Writing Challenge
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11/02/06
Good descriptions, good lesson!
11/04/06
stirred memories
11/04/06
Your language is just beautiful - such wonderful images you bring to my mind! Great characterization - and what a wonderful final paragraph. Great job.
11/04/06
Rich imagery and a talent for putting us in the narrator's place......tell me that this piece is a winner! This was an excellent story, very well written!
This was passionate and well-written. You eloquently spoke the mind of an eighth-grader, especially her conflicting feelings toward her teacher.
11/07/06
What I like - This was terrific! Your descriptions oozed with detail and reality! Good writing all the way through:)
What I might change - not a thing. I liked the title too - that is what captured my attention!