Hire
Writers
Editors
Home Tour About Read What's New Help Forums Join
My Account Login
Shop
Save
Support
E
Book
Store
Learn
About
Jesus
  

Win A Publishing Package HERE            

The HOME for Christian writers! The Home for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge

BACK TO
CHALLENGE
MAIN

INSTRUCTIONS

how it works
submission rules
guidelines for
choosing a level

ENTRIES

submit your entry
read current entries
read past entries
challenge winners



Our Daily Devotional HERE
Place it on your site or
receive it daily by email.





TRUST JESUS TODAY

TRY THE TEST



Share
how it works   Submit

Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Teacher (10/26/06)

TITLE: Scrapbook of Memories
By Rhonda Clark
10/29/06


 LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE
 SEND A PRIVATE COMMENT
 ADD TO MY FAVORITES

Long, slender fingers caressed the yellow scrapbook. With a gentle, loving touch they danced over the words, CLASS OF 2005-2006. A lump filled Laurie's throat and threatened to close it off as she stared at the album in her hands. Leaning back in her rocking chair, she pulled the thick book close to her. She couldn't believe in a mere three weeks a fresh crop of excited first graders would fill her class for the fifteenth time.

All summer, she had stared at this scrapbook, thinking how she was going to have to let these kids go and new ones fill her heart. Every day for the last eleven months, she had been praying for the children that filled this book. Soon she would start a new scrapbook, and had to release these children to God—but not before one final look, one final tribute to the children of 2005-2006.

Laying the book in her lap, Laurie stared at the pictures, with the childrens’ eyes full of wonder. There were Rachel, Lilly, and Shiloh on the first day of school. Rachel was a dreamer; she seemed to wake up in a new world every day. Lilly, on the other hand, was a born cynic with a perpetual rain cloud hanging over her. As for Shiloh, all she did was smile. Nothing ever seemed to get her down.

Laurie turned the page and found herself staring at the impish little grin of Brandon. Daily, he challenged her on a new front. She shuddered when she thought of the escaped lizard that ran amuck on the school bus during the class field trip. The high-pitched wails of the children still rang in her ears as she remembered herself crawling on the nasty, black floor of the bus, trying to retrieve the lightning-quick reptile. Not wanting to revisit any more of Brandon's shenanigans, she turned the page and found Carrie and Brian.

These kids were also challenges, but in a different way. They were eager to learn, but it came slow. A lot of work and patience went into helping them to graduate to second grade. For a while, it was touch and go whether Brian was going to make it, but he did.

Beside Carrie and Brian was a picture of Courtland dressed up for clown day. If any child was a class clown, it was him. He had an infectious smile and magnetic personality. Everybody wanted to be his friend—and they were. A giggle spilled out of her lips as she thought of how he came to school on Halloween dressed as a character from Saturday Night Fever and proceeded to teach her the hustle.

Flipping the page, she found the face of Tyler. This child was quiet and shy. He said no more than ten words the entire year. Every time she called on him, he would sink deep into his chair and his ears would turn the color of crimson. This shrinking personality made him an easy target for Donna. She was loud and boisterous, and always looking for a fight. Plus she never did any wrong. Many times Laurie had been berated by Donna's parents because she had punished their "sweet little Donna." Laurie made a mental note to say a special prayer for Donna's second grade teacher.

A few pages later, she found a picture of Scott. Scott was one of the sharpest kids she knew. He was easy to teach and learned quickly. Arrogance was his only downfall. Learning came so easy to him that he didn't bother learning to study. One day, she knew that would haunt him.

Next to Scott was Kylie. Laurie’s heart broke as the sad, brown eyes in the photograph seemed to plead for help. That help came one day in the form of social workers who removed her from school and sent her to live with grandparents in a different state. After Christmas break, she never saw this child again, but still prayed for her daily.

Laurie closed the book and rubbed her fingers across it one last time. Looking towards heaven, she prayed, "Lord, into your hands, I commit these children. Go with them into the second grade and into the world. Bless them and keep them. In Your precious and holy name I pray. Amen."

In silence, she placed the scrapbook next to the other thirteen on her bookshelf. She then picked up a sack that contained the parts and pieces of a new scrapbook.


The opinions expressed by authors may not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com.
If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be right now. CLICK HERE

JOIN US at FaithWriters for Free. Grow as a Writer and Spread the Gospel.


This article has been read 804 times
Member Comments
Member Date
L.M. Lee11/04/06
always found this to be the hardest part of being a teacher...letting go and embracing anew
Jan Ackerson 11/06/06
Oh my, this is wonderful! I've been teaching for alomst 30 years, and I dearly wish that I'd done something like this--so many of my students have faded away. Beautiful writing, just beautiful.
Allison Egley 11/06/06
Wow. Even though I've never had my "own" class, I can see all of these students through those I've worked with in my college classes. I can also see bits and pieces of myself in the students. Wonderful writing.
Joanne Sher 11/06/06
Oh, I LOVE LOVE LOVE this, Rhonda! I could see every one of those children, and the teachers's wonderful heart. I hope you inspire some of the teachers here to take up a project like this!
Wonderful!
Donna Emery11/07/06
How wonderful! I could easily imagine this precious teacher reading about and praying for her charges. Thanks so much fir sharing this.
Trina Courtenay11/07/06
wiping away my tears - I'm not a teacher, but I truly felt for the teacher in this story. Thank-you for writing this and for sharing.
Rhonda Clark 11/09/06
It's a good one
Rhonda Clark 11/09/06
I did not review my own article. My son left the above comments. :)
Trina Courtenay11/09/06
Way to Write Rhonda! Congrats on being Highly Commended!