The Official Writing Challenge
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Clever presentation of the value of good leadership.
03/22/05
You're illustrations are very vivid (the turtle abuse was heart-breaking to read). They made a great intro to your lesson at the end which is concise and well done too. Nice job.
03/23/05
A nice summary and punchy 'What about you?' last paragraph. Well done.
Excellent little moral story here. Interesting read for 9-10 year olds too. The ending gave the reader something to ponder too
03/28/05
Ok, first, POOR Mr. Turtle. ;) You depicted the mischievous boys SO well and still taught this reader a few valuable lessons. 1) Don't swing on ropes in Uncle Joe's barn AND 2) heed the wisdom contained within God's Word, should I be asked to step into the role of leader. Great piece, Congrats!! - Nancy